This is my entry to the July Artsy Essay Contest at
This Months Topic: What is your favorite and most inspiring possession? Tell us about it, and if you want an extra creative challenge... tell us about it without naming it until the very last sentence of your essay:):):)
My most inspiring possession
Would have to be something I hold very dear to me.
It affects every thought
Every action I take, It even helps me make many mistakes
It evokes elation, a sense of euphoria
When ever I see something phantasmagoria
It enables me to feel comfort and calm
Even when the weather is fierce and the wind is strong
It helps me coup with loneliness and depression
Even when my head is filled with so many unanswered questions.
It’s gotten me through times of loss when a loved one have passed
Even when the world seems so empty and vast
It’s filled me with amazement and a passion for life
Even in times when the worlds filled with much strife
If I can not embrace this possession of mine
I have a hard time being able to shine
I am lost with out my inspiring possession
It helps me answer all of my questions
My most inspiring possession you see
Is my EMOTIONS that mean so much to me
10 comments:
Yea Kristal! Very well done and I am so glad you wrote an entry! Suchj a nice way to approach it with rhyming meter, and a very thoughtful entry.
I am so glad you decided to join us... this has been a long time coming, since way back in aol days!
Judi
http://judithheartsong.blogspot.com/
aha... very insightful.. this was wonderful.... thank you for reminding me how important my own emotions are to being me....
I have to admit, my emotions are important to me, although, there are times I wish I could turn them off, 'cause I have a hard time controlling them.
Its weird because you mention some emotions in your post, but still I didn't know till the end.
This was a great poem, I liked it alot! What a great entry, good luck!
~Colleen :)
This was a very creative entry. I enjoyed it very much. Good luck!
Sam
BRAVO.........wonderful entry.......and so very true! Thanks. Anne/ksquester
Thank you everyone...
Very Original! And a great entry for Judith's contest... I really enjoyed it, Thank you for sharing!
How very true. Emotions link us to the world around us and are constant indicators that we are living, regardless of whether things are good or tough.
Good luck!
http://journals.aol.com/tschamberland/beliefinfreedom/
very insightful!
http://journals.aol.com/psychfun/MeThinksTooMuch/
http://journals.aol.com/psychfun/somethingelsetothinkabout/
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